sorry but no from me

its just a little too somple.

my ideas

#1 - to use a different time of day, something with a bit more mood, sunset and sunrise especially
#2 - you can use recorder to make some better angles, and get the plane central in the shot, or not if thats the aim.
#3 - some different ground formations to look at, the alps work especially well for this kind of in flight shot.

hope this helps

cheers
james