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Aug 27th, 2007 at 10:14pm

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     first post and one of my first edits  Grin hope you likey!! the F-18 is dramatically blurred (a woopsy Embarrassed)...
this is my first secerny edit ever look at my drawing skills!!!!
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this is my first commercial edit ever lol i hope you like!! Roll Eyes
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check out my post in freeware section!! please i want comments!!!!!
please i need post im restless thats how you are when your 14!!!!!
 

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Reply #1 - Aug 27th, 2007 at 10:42pm

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Great first works, M8!  Smiley
 
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Reply #2 - Aug 27th, 2007 at 11:03pm

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very nice i like the one with the hornet!!  Grin
 
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Reply #3 - Aug 28th, 2007 at 9:33pm

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ok im starting to hate these pictures  Roll Eyes
 

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Reply #4 - Aug 29th, 2007 at 5:39am
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OK, I will be truthful here.

I don't like them. All I see, is the original picture with a filter/effect slapped on. The first, is a good start in the world of composites (two images blended together). Like you said, it is a little too blurred, if I were you, I would blur the plane a little less, or blur the background (slightly) to give it a sense of speed.

There really is nothing edited in the second apart from the filter edit. I don't quite see what the aim was for this picture, perhaps, leave out the mosaic effect next time, and work on enhancing the picture in general (lighting, colour etc.). This applies to the third aswell. Leave out the watercolour, and enhance it like the second one.
 
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Reply #5 - Aug 29th, 2007 at 1:17pm

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Grin thanks it was really dark and i didn't have the light on so i couldn't see that well when i was editing until morning after i saved it  Angry gotta remember to save back-up files!!!! Embarrassed and for the second one i had no purpose for editing it i just decide to show it cause it was the first picture that i ever edited (i was just fooling around with ps Cool)
 

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