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Jan 24th, 2007 at 6:47pm

Tchkinjiu   Offline
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I posted this in the edited forum, but I'd like it to be picked apart.  I like it, but it feels like something is missing...not sure.  Maybe someone can find it and point it out, maybe the prop or something  Smiley


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« Last Edit: Jan 24th, 2007 at 10:39pm by Clipper »  

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Reply #1 - Jan 25th, 2007 at 4:40am

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I don't think ts missing anything, its bloody awsome, it looks soooooo real its untrue.
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Reply #2 - Jan 25th, 2007 at 5:32am

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It's so amazingly real that it's hard to find something missing. Here are my suggestions:
- possibly add some spinning prop effect
- possibly remove the lens flare
- possibly edit the green nav light on the wing... it's the only thing in the shot that looks like FS, the rest is real-world-like.
- it's a pity that the right tip of the tail is not visible
Other than that, all thumbs up!
 

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Reply #3 - Jan 25th, 2007 at 5:38pm

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I think it's one of the better edits around, so I wouldn't change much. One thing I would change is the emboss effect on the edge. It doesn't add anything to the pic IMHO.
 
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