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Is this good? / Screenshot Critique (Read 865 times)
Jan 20th, 2007 at 2:59pm

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Hi.

This is my first work with Photoshop, what do you think?

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comments are welcome
 
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Reply #1 - Jan 20th, 2007 at 3:05pm

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Why don't you try to explain to everyone what you did here, and what you were trying to accomplish.. Smiley
 

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Reply #2 - Jan 20th, 2007 at 3:14pm

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I wanted to make a nice afterburner.I readed in Studio V how to do it.
 
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Reply #3 - Jan 20th, 2007 at 3:45pm
Heretic   Ex Member

 
If you did the afterburner, you did it very well, although the colour should be more blue-ish for a Tornado. Wink
 
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Reply #4 - Jan 20th, 2007 at 4:01pm
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i think he has attempted to add heatblur to the afterburner effect
 
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Reply #5 - Jan 21st, 2007 at 7:45pm

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Well, it looks nice to me, but the angle is off...
 
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Reply #6 - Jan 21st, 2007 at 8:19pm
Jakemaster   Ex Member

 
The afterburner is nice, but the screenshot needs a better angle (higher up), and there needs to be some sort of a background like clouds.
 
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