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Jan 19^th, 2007 at 5:30pm

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Hows it look?

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Reply #1 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 5:46pm

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Gives me a lovely feeling inside, makes me feel like playing puppy's, AWESOME job!!!

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Reply #2 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 5:49pm

Heathaze Ex Member

Well, I really like the background, lovely sky scape. A few issues I have with the Mustangs though. First thing I notice is the lack of (noticeable at least) prop circles which takes a bit away from it for me. Also, I believe the cloud is too static, a little blur on it would have just livened up the shot a bit and shown a sense of motion. Finally, and this is a nit pick, I don't like the inclusion of vortices, yes the 'Tang did do it, but it doesn't fit the situation in my book.

Still a nice piece of work though

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Reply #3 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 6:59pm

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Like this? The only thing is I think it looked more "peaceful" without the motion blur Grin

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Reply #4 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 11:22pm

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lovely

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Reply #5 - Jan 20^th, 2007 at 3:59am

sgt donut Ex Member

the first one is great love it

the second one the prop circles are too flat and ruin it a bit for me, if you are using photoshop you can change the perspective in edit/transform

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Reply #6 - Jan 20^th, 2007 at 5:17am

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I don't think you should blur the clouds. I think you should change the placement of the aircraft to get a better composition and thus more 'movement' in your shot. Read these two tutorials for more tips on composition. The props are a second problem, but nothing you can't fix. Read this tutorial about adding props.

There ya go! A little more work and this could become a masterpiece... Wink

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Reply #7 - Jan 20^th, 2007 at 8:36am

Heathaze Ex Member

Ironically, I'm in the minority when I say I certainly prefer that second shot, I guess it's just down to my preference of real action to static images. Although I have to agree with the comment about the props not looking quite right.

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