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Sep 22^nd, 2009 at 12:49am

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And then her sugar daddy, who arrives on the runway and kneels down before her with a bouquet of lilies and hydrangeas, marries her and she lives happily ever after!

Amen. Wink

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Reply #1 - Sep 3^rd, 2009 at 6:30am

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I'm impressed! Cool

Very cool and original. Smiley

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Reply #2 - Sep 3^rd, 2009 at 11:54am

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Haha! I found this quite funny, and I showed it to my 13 year old bro who keeps trying to push me off FSX when I'm on it.

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Reply #3 - Sep 3^rd, 2009 at 2:12pm

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Cool idea. Can we just add to the story in this thread, or would it be better elsewhere?

You can simply add here,and if the mods think it belong elseware,they can move it. Thanx

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Reply #4 - Sep 3^rd, 2009 at 2:22pm

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Added above. ^^

Any guidelines for this story or are we pretty much just ensuring that the main character doesn't go postal?
Funny themes, dark themes (kind of started on that trend), happy themes, what?

....Sean......haven't done this sort of thing in a long time......

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Reply #5 - Sep 3^rd, 2009 at 2:30pm

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Added above. ^^

Any guidelines for this story or are we pretty much just ensuring that the main character doesn't go postal?
Funny themes, dark themes (kind of started on that trend), happy themes, what?

....Sean......haven't done this sort of thing in a long time......

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Reply #6 - Sep 3^rd, 2009 at 2:32pm

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Added above. ^^

Any guidelines for this story or are we pretty much just ensuring that the main character doesn't go postal?
Funny themes, dark themes (kind of started on that trend), happy themes, what?

....Sean......haven't done this sort of thing in a long time......

You can ad as you like,no specific line.

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Reply #7 - Sep 3^rd, 2009 at 9:23pm

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So, Holly, my girlfriend, is the main character of this story?

Grin

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Reply #8 - Sep 3^rd, 2009 at 9:48pm

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Lol, didn't know your gf's name was Holly. That's a creepy coincidence! Grin

I just picked it because I like the name.

(Could be extra creepy if she's the same age and disposition of the person in the story........)
Cheesy

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Reply #9 - Sep 4^th, 2009 at 2:15am

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Lol, didn't know your gf's name was Holly. That's a creepy coincidence! Grin

I just picked it because I like the name.

(Could be extra creepy if she's the same age and disposition of the person in the story........)
Cheesy

hehe ya that is my little daughter Lize-Mari. Sean, you are a real writer

will add a little bit later on! great!

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Reply #10 - Sep 4^th, 2009 at 9:53am

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Cute kid, sir!

Confused on something though, I don't know if I established Holly's disposition well enough which is confusing me in regard to the personality of her imaginary friend. Should Holly be dark and gloomy or still relatively happy? (Thinking that in the first case, Amy could be the happy personality, or in the second case, Amy could be the tormented and sad personality that Holly is hiding.)

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Reply #11 - Sep 4^th, 2009 at 9:57am

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thanks, uhmm actually I showed this to my wife,and it was her addition to the storyline - but I dont mind changing a little

afterall it is just for fun!so you can edit out fhat you feel up to!

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Reply #12 - Sep 4^th, 2009 at 10:03am

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I like the addition, I just wanted to make sure that you didn't already have a certain direction in mind for this character. I'm planning on editing around that added portion and have the Amy character be the dark and gloomy one, with Holly being the one that hides her pain behind her happiness. (THAT was an awkward explanation to write....)

I'm going to be offline for the next couple of hours, so hopefully you and/or other people will add on more. Feel free to change stuff around too rather than going with my approach.

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Reply #13 - Sep 4^th, 2009 at 10:25am

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Making this a sticky for as long as it continues to draw contributions and attention to itself. Cool

How about the occasional edited screenshot to illustrate? Wink

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Reply #14 - Sep 4^th, 2009 at 9:47pm

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Before we continue, can we get a list of characters and a plot going?

I'm will be doing a film project later on in my school year and would love to use this if possible.

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Reply #15 - Sep 5^th, 2009 at 1:33am

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Pleasure, it was a spur of the moment thing. Will work on the story later today

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Reply #16 - Sep 5^th, 2009 at 9:47am

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We may move this over to the StudioV, that way it is sure to get more attention than it is now.

This idea is too good to be left by the way side. Cool

Sean, what's up with those two links you posted? They are not very, 'friendly'. Huh

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Reply #17 - Sep 5^th, 2009 at 3:12pm

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ShaneG wrote on Sep 5^th, 2009 at 9:47am:

We may move this over to the StudioV, that way it is sure to get more attention than it is now.

It is good with me Shane, not all the shots to come have to be edited, and also this will have more activity like a workshop.
Thanks , appreciate all!

Skoker, you are welcome to use if it complies with the copyright policy of the forum, as well as the other writers. but dont see any problem Wink

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Reply #18 - Sep 5^th, 2009 at 3:27pm

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When we get this done, we'll clean this thread up so it's just one continuous, uninterrupted story.

Looking great so far. Cool

Come on all you aspiring authors, get in on this.

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Reply #19 - Sep 5^th, 2009 at 3:28pm

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Feel free to change stuff around too rather than going with my approach.

You're approach is fine.
The best writing I've read in years Wink

Excellent idea, Jake Cool

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Reply #20 - Sep 5^th, 2009 at 8:23pm

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Sorry about the images, I guess that website employed anti-hotlinking countermeasures.

Great addition JakesF14. I really like how you wrote about Holly and her "other self" interacting with each other. I'll try to add on either late tonight or tomorrow.

Oh yeah, Jordan it's fine if with me if you use it, but just remember to get permission from any and all contributing authors. I'm sure anybody here that contributes will have no problem with it's outside usage though. Wink

Went back and did some very quick editing of my first major entry. I would suggest that all contributors edit their existing contributions when possible in order to make everything perfect!

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Reply #21 - Sep 9^th, 2009 at 7:44am

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Two things. It should be "we normally are the only ones who fly over..."

it's delta not data

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Reply #22 - Sep 9^th, 2009 at 7:57am

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skoker wrote on Sep 9^th, 2009 at 7:44am:

Two things. It should be "we normally are the only ones who fly over..."

it's delta not data

thank you very much! I will make more mistakes like this, as Afrikaans is my mother tounge

if somebody see any more punctuation faults, please help out! Tongue

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Reply #23 - Sep 14^th, 2009 at 11:05pm

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Will write more after this busy week is over.
As always, contributions from anyone is encouraged.

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Reply #24 - Sep 22^nd, 2009 at 7:47am

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Off-Topic replies have been moved to this Topic.

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Reply #25 - Sep 22^nd, 2009 at 7:53am

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Thanks Shane

Sean, good work, i like the way you opened the field for possibilities! I will defeniltly add more screenshots as well as to the story self next week, just having a hectic week!

Enjoy!

(Shane, maybe when you have time, you can cleanup this topic, just bringing the story together. maybe add chapters..?)

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