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Aug 19th, 2009 at 1:38am

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hi this is a screen shot of my latest work would like some feed back from users of FSX to pick any points that could be used to improve this model it is a singles engine fighter / trainer any comments welcome

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Reply #1 - Aug 19th, 2009 at 3:46pm

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Well, I don't use FSX, but I do design.  I like the lines of the aircraft, but the nose might need to be just a bit longer, if you can manage it.  You should certainly think about adding a pilot in there if you can.  I always find that a cockpit without a pilot is like a theatre without a show: nice to look around at, but just a bit creepy.
 

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Reply #2 - Sep 12th, 2009 at 11:01am

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CARRIER OPS!!!!!!!! Grin Grin Grin
That thing would look great on the deck of a carrier!
 

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Reply #3 - Sep 12th, 2009 at 4:02pm

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Looks like a F-16 and tornado had a baby! Grin
 


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Reply #4 - Sep 13th, 2009 at 12:13am

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I second the suggestion of adding a pilot.  Seeing a nice model flying along without one (or two, since that's a two seater) just looks weird.

Blending the part where the vertical stabalizer meets the fuselage would also look nicer, too.

Cool looking aircraft, though! Smiley
 

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Reply #5 - Sep 19th, 2009 at 2:32pm

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Rather than make the wings and empennage as separate pieces, extrude them from the fuselage.  You'll get a much better looking connection that way.

Beautiful work...
 
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