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CRJ700 taking off (Read 187 times)
Jul 29th, 2009 at 9:40pm

BrandonF   Offline
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I know it could be better, but I am still learning special effects.

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What do you think?


IMAGE EDITED: now the lights are not so bright.
 
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Reply #1 - Jul 29th, 2009 at 9:41pm

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Make the lights smaller and it should be good.
 


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Reply #2 - Jul 29th, 2009 at 9:49pm

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skoker wrote on Jul 29th, 2009 at 9:41pm:
Make the lights smaller and it should be good.

That's the biggest problem I see as well. In the future, try to include some scenery or weather to make it more interesting. Also, try not to use the defalt paint jobs.

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Reply #3 - Jul 30th, 2009 at 7:31am

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Really nice. Maybe make the heat wave a little more random as it looks a little too uniform. Great shot!
 
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Reply #4 - Jul 30th, 2009 at 2:02pm

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really like the shot and angle, and love the smoke effects too!

one thing bugs me though...

i've heard of belly landings, but belly take-offs?!  Tongue

(actually there was one famous one in history... at the end or "airplane" the inflatable dummy took off without any undercaraige!  Grin )

if the undercaraige in this shot was just starting to retract that would be even better!

lovin the effects though,

Deano  Smiley
 

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