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Jan 30th, 2008 at 5:57pm

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Still havent quite got the hang of airliners, but this is my latest shot although i am pretty pleased with it Tongue

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Please ignore the default ai i forgot to remove it Embarrassed

Any tips on what i could do to improve?
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Reply #1 - Jan 30th, 2008 at 5:58pm

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What the blummin 'eck do you mean you haven't got the hang of them? That's incredible!

Sorry, but this just has to be a 10 from me. Cheesy
 

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Reply #2 - Jan 30th, 2008 at 6:01pm

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It took me about 20 mins to get that shot, i just cant quite manage to frame the aircraft and find an angle i like and get something else happening in the shot like an airport should be, military jets are so easy...just bombing along at low level or soaring above the clouds Grin  and thanks for the rating Wink
 

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Reply #3 - Jan 30th, 2008 at 6:04pm

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Tom... wrote on Jan 30th, 2008 at 6:01pm:
It took me about 20 mins to get that shot, i just cant quite manage to frame the aircraft and find an angle i like and get something else happening in the shot like an airport should be, military jets are so easy...just bombing along at low level or soaring above the clouds Grin  and thanks for the rating Wink


You're worrying about nothing; the aircraft's perfectly positioned and there's enough background stuff going on to keep a person occupied for 20 years! Shocked
 

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Reply #4 - Jan 30th, 2008 at 6:24pm

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I really like it mate, great angle and great scenery, lots going on! Really stunning image!  Smiley

On the real word side, that is a lot of flap for take off  Wink
 

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Reply #5 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 4:01pm

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Thankyou for the ratining, please can some more people rate it to give it a chance

Thanks

Tom  Wink
 

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Reply #6 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 4:17pm
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7.5. Quite a nice angle but I think there's a bit too much depth, resolution wise. Leaves a fair bit of dead space, like the empty taxiway right through the middle of the shot, which could be eliminated with a bit of cropping (or zoom) and a slightly altered angle.
 
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Reply #7 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 4:23pm

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I think it's great, 9.5 from me
 

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Reply #8 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 4:42pm

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Woww great!!!! Lovely scenery, nice dirt on the paint... good angle...

9/10 from me! Smiley
 

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Reply #9 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 6:44pm

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9.5 from me, absolutely supurb!!
 

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Reply #10 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 6:56pm

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Very nice ... looks like you've got inspired Grin

I don't really like rating art (as expression and taste) so I'll give it a 10!

Very nice screenshot.


BTW: you 'forgot' to remove your default AI Wink
 

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Reply #11 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 7:45pm

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The top of the image looks empty even with the AI aircraft...Some jetways would've been very nice along with some airport traffic...The bottom of the image is almost way too "heavy" with the main action taking place there...

I'll give this a 7.5 Wink
 

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Reply #12 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 7:56pm

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8.5

Great loads of traffic and detail. The default AI ruins it a bit and I find the sharpness of the plane a bit distracting from the shot. All and all a pretty well composed shot. Wink
 

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Reply #13 - Jan 31st, 2008 at 8:29pm

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NOt much wrong with this unique perspective. The principle aircraft is so well positioned. You can almost feel the lift. 9.0

Remember, if anyone receives the necessary 90+/100 in the first 10 rates to their pic, it's uo to you to let me know, so I can put it into our Gallery.  Smiley
 

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Reply #14 - Feb 1st, 2008 at 2:27am

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Just thought I'd post the total so far; from 9 ratings, Tom has 80.5 points.

So he needs a 9.5 or higher and it's in the gallery. Cheesy
 

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Reply #15 - Feb 1st, 2008 at 2:29am

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Thanks Doug, i was just about to get my calculator out  Grin
 

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Reply #16 - Feb 1st, 2008 at 2:42am

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Harold wrote on Jan 31st, 2008 at 6:56pm:
BTW: you 'forgot' to remove your default AI Wink


Just out of curiosity, how does one remove the default AI?
 

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Reply #17 - Feb 1st, 2008 at 2:57am

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Go into your fs9 directory then go to the folder scenery then the folder world then the folder scenery and there should be a file called traffic030528.bgl move that out of the folder into your documents or something so that you can put it back if you want to  Wink
 

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Reply #18 - Feb 1st, 2008 at 11:24am

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A beautiful shot Tom, excellent composition and I really like the angle!

I give it 9.5.

The only thing stopping it from a 10 for me is the presence of some default Ai. Nevertheless, a fantastic shot!

Regards,
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Reply #19 - Feb 1st, 2008 at 11:32am

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which makes an exact 90! congrats tom! Cheesy
 

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Reply #20 - Feb 1st, 2008 at 3:51pm

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Great Shot! Gallery Bound!!
 

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Reply #21 - Feb 1st, 2008 at 4:40pm

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Celtman wrote on Feb 1st, 2008 at 11:24am:
A beautiful shot Tom, excellent composition and I really like the angle!

I give it 9.5.

The only thing stopping it from a 10 for me is the presence of some default Ai. Nevertheless, a fantastic shot!

Regards,
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Phew! That was a close one  Grin
Nice shot there...
 

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