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Jan 20th, 2008 at 5:05am

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Tell me what you think about this shot.  Smiley
 

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Reply #1 - Jan 20th, 2008 at 5:21am

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The clouds, sky and aircraft are all very good.... but I would have taken the shot over some mountains or something - that sea is a bit dull. Also, if you want the retro black and white look, it might be better trying a sepia effect. Wink
 

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Reply #2 - Jan 20th, 2008 at 1:56pm

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spitfire boy wrote on Jan 20th, 2008 at 5:21am:
it might be better trying a sepia effect. Wink



the reason being that based on simply the style of that AC, full color wasn't widely available yet, and B&W although commonplace was starting to get more widely replaced by sepia and other light color films.

 

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Reply #3 - Jan 20th, 2008 at 2:04pm

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JLangholzJ wrote on Jan 20th, 2008 at 1:56pm:
spitfire boy wrote on Jan 20th, 2008 at 5:21am:
it might be better trying a sepia effect. Wink



the reason being that based on simply the style of that AC, full color wasn't widely available yet, and B&W although commonplace was starting to get more widely replaced by sepia and other light color films.



And also cos it'd look better... Grin
 

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Reply #4 - Jan 20th, 2008 at 2:57pm

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Personally I prefer B&W for his shot, because originally it shouldn't look like an old photograph, but like a simple, sharp, B&W photo.  Wink
But I made two sepia versions. Is it better now?  Smiley

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Reply #5 - Jan 20th, 2008 at 5:59pm

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I like the sharper grainy one alot! Cheesy
 

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Reply #6 - Jan 23rd, 2008 at 6:24pm

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Nice! I like the third one the best!  Wink It has the most contrast between the sky/plane and the clouds and water.
 

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Reply #7 - Jan 23rd, 2008 at 7:41pm

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sepia one indeed look good

spitfire boy, I always see you dishing out on everyone elses work but i do not ever remember seeing you post anything  Roll Eyes 

EDIT: just saw your post about 3 down.... but still
 
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Reply #8 - Jan 24th, 2008 at 2:29am

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J. wrote on Jan 23rd, 2008 at 7:41pm:
sepia one indeed look good

spitfire boy, I always see you dishing out on everyone elses work but i do not ever remember seeing you post anything  Roll Eyes  

EDIT: just saw your post about 3 down.... but still


Hey, all I'm doing is giving constructive criticism... which is what they ask for by posting these things here in the first place... and the reason I post in alot of these sort of threads is because I want people to be able to get better at screenshooting. What on earth is wrong with that?

I don't post many screenshots because I don't have time to... but what business is that of yours? Angry

P.S. If you're questioning contribution... the comp that's running at the mo in the studio... that was my idea. Huh
 

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Reply #9 - Jan 24th, 2008 at 8:59am

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I agree with you completly, spitfire boy!
I always prefer rather critical comments because there's no perfect shot and there is always something to improve.
So when I see a critical comment I know that someone really thought about the shot and not just wrote something.
So thanks for your critique spitfire boy.  Wink
 

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Reply #10 - Jan 24th, 2008 at 5:29pm

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Sorry about the above post of mine.... I was tired and irritable at the time and I was ready to snap at anything. Although I must say that being accused of lack of contribution I find not only unfounded but also unacceptable, in my mind at least.
 

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Reply #11 - Jan 24th, 2008 at 5:32pm

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spitfire boy wrote on Jan 24th, 2008 at 5:29pm:
Sorry about the above post of mine.... I was tired and irritable at the time and I was ready to snap at anything. Although I must say that being accused of lack of contribution I find not only unfounded but also unacceptable, in my mind at least.


i was just saying, you seem ready to critique on everyone elses work yet rarely see yours.
 
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Reply #12 - Jan 24th, 2008 at 5:57pm

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J. wrote on Jan 24th, 2008 at 5:32pm:
spitfire boy wrote on Jan 24th, 2008 at 5:29pm:
Sorry about the above post of mine.... I was tired and irritable at the time and I was ready to snap at anything. Although I must say that being accused of lack of contribution I find not only unfounded but also unacceptable, in my mind at least.


i was just saying, you seem ready to critique on everyone elses work yet rarely see yours.


But why is there anything fundamentally wrong with that? Huh

P.S. I can't recall seeing much of yours either... Grin

Anyway, lets stop this now before it gets out of hand. I just wanted to make clear that me helping people become better screenshooters by telling them where improvement can be made does not automatically mean I have to chain myself to my computer (I have other things which have to take priority, bear in mind I'm in the exams period, years 10 + 11) and post a fully fledged screenshot set every 5 minutes. I prefer to come up with one occasionally that I feel I've put a lot of effort into. And I do NOT wish to be lectured to on how I should change that habit. I mean, so what if I'm a bit slow posting my work... that does not automatically mean I cannot get involved in this area, where the shots are displayed. It's a common and rather irritating trend I've been noticing... it is NOT tantamount to hypocrisy, because I'm not accusing anyone of anything or belittling them in any way.
 

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Reply #13 - Jan 24th, 2008 at 6:10pm

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yeh but i dont post crit in every single post with a shot in. good luck with those exams... the ones you sit in 2 years are much harder though Wink
 
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Reply #14 - Jan 25th, 2008 at 2:34am

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J. wrote on Jan 24th, 2008 at 6:10pm:
yeh but i dont post crit in every single post with a shot in.


But what's the problem with me doing so? Answer; there isn't one.

End of. Grin
 

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Reply #15 - Jan 25th, 2008 at 8:11am

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would be nice to see the "expertise" you are dishing oh so equally to everyone else used in your own shots... surely you must be a master of screenart
 
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Reply #16 - Jan 25th, 2008 at 10:43am

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J. wrote on Jan 25th, 2008 at 8:11am:
would be nice to see the "expertise" you are dishing oh so equally to everyone else used in your own shots... surely you must be a master of screenart


For pity's sake, when in the previous postings do you see me claiming myself as an expert?! All I am doing is offering critique - which incidentally is what the studio was originally created for, amongst other things - that the people posting these shots are asking for, and my own screenshot-posting habits are IRRELEVANT.
 

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Reply #17 - Jan 25th, 2008 at 7:56pm

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....I like the second rmake, the fuzzy one.....

does that make me an expert?? Smiley sorry i couldn't help..
 

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Reply #18 - Jan 25th, 2008 at 8:01pm

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I like the original...I for one like the long, expanse of water...It's always nice to see a change once in a while...No need to always have "action" in one's shots... Cool
 

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Reply #19 - Jan 26th, 2008 at 4:02am

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JLangholzJ wrote on Jan 25th, 2008 at 7:56pm:
....I like the second rmake, the fuzzy one.....

does that make me an expert?? Smiley sorry i couldn't help..


Ok, lets not bring this up again. Me and J have resolved this via PM. Wink
 

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Reply #20 - Jan 26th, 2008 at 4:47am

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J is see a lot of great work coming from Spitfire! What i don't see is you posting much shots. I find Spitfire boy and most other great SS Artists help very helpful and smart! Please do not get start making accusations over other people giving help when they asked and needed it.
 

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Reply #21 - Jan 26th, 2008 at 6:38am

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Let's stop this bickering please. The Studio is NOT the place for it. I'd appreciate everyone backing off here and getting back to posting relevant, friendly comments.
 

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Reply #22 - Jan 26th, 2008 at 1:38pm

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Clipper wrote on Jan 26th, 2008 at 6:38am:
Let's stop this bickering please. The Studio is NOT the place for it. I'd appreciate everyone backing off here and getting back to posting relevant, friendly comments.


I just thought I'd mention that this was resolved between the two of us much earlier today. Thus everyone else should leave it alone too. Wink
 

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