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Jan 14th, 2008 at 2:09pm

Tom...   Offline
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Scene as the lighting in my last shot was the thing that most people though was really good i decided to go out and get another shot with the emphisis on lighting

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Reply #1 - Jan 14th, 2008 at 2:30pm

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The plane's way too orange for my taste Undecided

Unfortunately, I'm not a big fan of psychedelic colors Undecided
 

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Reply #2 - Jan 14th, 2008 at 2:40pm

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The lighting isn't too realistic, but it makes for a VERY nice edit indeed! Cool Cool
 

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Reply #3 - Jan 14th, 2008 at 4:45pm

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If this was an edit intended to look real, it'd score badly. However, it clearly isn't intended to look real, so it scores very highly... Grin

Seriously, I love the colours in this; the exaggeration is what makes it for me. Cheesy
 

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Reply #4 - Jan 14th, 2008 at 8:49pm

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I don;t use photoshop, istead i prefer gimp, but thier relatively that same.

From the looks of your previous pictures, you are editing the whole picture at once. Why not try adding several layers so you could edit the plane and clouds sperately (as far as shading goes)

I'll peck away at your first one, and see what I come up with.

either way, they both look good Smiley
 

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Reply #5 - Jan 14th, 2008 at 9:24pm

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Interesting and intense. (first one) IMO, Would be even better if the tail was more visible.
 

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