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Nov 23rd, 2007 at 2:01am

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My first pic in The workshop.
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Reply #1 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 2:18am

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6...The aircraft is too far away plus the G-effects really make it hard to see the aircraft...The clouds don't look to good too...Sorry Undecided
 

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Reply #2 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 2:38am

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6.5 from here. The scenery is bland, the sky is bland, the aircraft looks compressed, but it looks good doing what it is doing, so a small bonus there.

Not the worst, but not the best.  Undecided
 
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Reply #3 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 3:10am
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Turn up your Anti-Aliasing, zoom in allittle, and try adding a nice backdrop. Maybe more clouds or mountains or something. Smiley

4/10.
 
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Reply #4 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 3:46am

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Its a 5 from me, definetly room for improvement. Wink
 


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Reply #5 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 3:47am

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Turn up your Anti-Aliasing, zoom in allittle, and try adding a nice backdrop. Maybe more clouds or mountains or something. Smiley

4/10.


Yeah i know that the backround is bad(it's one of my old shots)

And Ashar G-effects are not on Huh

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb Embarrassed)
 

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Reply #6 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 4:56am

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4.5/10

All the criticisms above, but also you're image is 44kb / 100 (hence why the aircraft looks like the AA isn't turned on probably) - remember, each shot can be up to 100kb Smiley

Keep at it though, you'll never improve if you don't keep screenshooting! Cool
 

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Reply #7 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 5:00am

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6 Good advice from Cspyro here, keep at it, look carefully at others shots. Look in the Gallery, see what constitutes a brilliant shot and try to duplicate some of the techniques you see. Ask questions here at the Studio, everyone is here to help, advise and critique.
 

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Reply #8 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 9:37am

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nice effect, but there isnt anything I can say that hasnt already been said above. practice! Wink

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Reply #9 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 10:35am

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Its a 4 from me I'm afraid. Same reasons as above.  Wink
 
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Reply #10 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 10:43am

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5

Needs more detail and AA. Some nice coloring wouldn't hurt. Wink
 

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Reply #11 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 12:18pm

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And Ashar G-effects are not on Huh

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb Embarrassed)


What's the white stuff then? Roll Eyes Grin
 

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Reply #12 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 10:50pm

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Ashar wrote on Nov 23rd, 2007 at 12:18pm:
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And Ashar G-effects are not on Huh

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb Embarrassed)


What's the white stuff then? Roll Eyes Grin


That's the vapor that comes on with the lights
 

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Reply #13 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 11:03pm

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Quote:
Ashar wrote on Nov 23rd, 2007 at 12:18pm:
Quote:
And Ashar G-effects are not on Huh

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb Embarrassed)


What's the white stuff then? Roll Eyes Grin


That's the vapor that comes on with the lights


It's still a G-effect Wink Wink

It's bound to a light key rather than being XML coded Wink
 

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Reply #14 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 11:36pm

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Ashar wrote on Nov 23rd, 2007 at 11:03pm:
Quote:
Ashar wrote on Nov 23rd, 2007 at 12:18pm:
Quote:
And Ashar G-effects are not on Huh

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb Embarrassed)


What's the white stuff then? Roll Eyes Grin


That's the vapor that comes on with the lights


It's still a G-effect Wink Wink

It's bound to a light key rather than being XML coded Wink


Actually it is but i did not know where to put the XML files Grin

I don't care Wink
 

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Reply #15 - Nov 23rd, 2007 at 11:43pm

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Quote:
Ashar wrote on Nov 23rd, 2007 at 11:03pm:
Quote:
Ashar wrote on Nov 23rd, 2007 at 12:18pm:
Quote:
And Ashar G-effects are not on Huh

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb Embarrassed)


What's the white stuff then? Roll Eyes Grin


That's the vapor that comes on with the lights


It's still a G-effect Wink Wink

It's bound to a light key rather than being XML coded Wink


Actually it is but i did not know where to put the XML files Grin

I don't care Wink


FS2002 does not support XML I think Tongue
 

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