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Nov 11th, 2007 at 5:42am

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This was a possible entry to Wars, but I eventually decided to go with another shot. So what do you think? Interesting perspective? Boring? Too something, not enough something else? Let's have it....both barrels.. Wink What would you have done differently? Once you're done with the screenshot, take a rip at my sig. See any defects in the construction? Colors complimentary or clashy? What would you change to make it nicer?...

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Reply #1 - Nov 11th, 2007 at 6:24am

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This is a very nice shot Clipper. The only thing I don't like is the ramp in front of the Cessna. I do like that shot though. The golden shine looks great, and it looks to be an interesting angle. Is it taken from the back of another plane?
 

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Reply #2 - Nov 11th, 2007 at 6:29am

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Fighter, I got this perspective by zooming out in spot view using F1View.  Smiley
 

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Reply #3 - Nov 11th, 2007 at 7:09am

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too grey, and the ramp... otherwise beautiful lighting as usual, and interresting compo. it would have been better with a different sky, less clouds, touches of blue or other colours, like you usually do, or like your entry for the war.

regarding your sig, the shots are blurred, it would have been really better if they were sharper, otherwise nice sig!!!!

(note to myself: don't criticise others sig, and go and get a new one....)
 

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Reply #4 - Nov 11th, 2007 at 10:24am

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Very interesting perspective but the stairs kinda ruin it. If you have moved the stairs a bit to the left the shot would be great. Wink
 

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Reply #5 - Nov 11th, 2007 at 2:41pm

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For me its the obvious..... the stairs take away all the attention from any of the aircraft.  It would have been a big mistake to enter this for the wars Danny.

Also the sky lacks some of your fluffy clouds and intense colour, Wink and the top edge of the black terminal seems to create a split in the shot, meaning that it sort of looks like its in half.

For me the sig is fine, just that the four shots at the bottom seem a little blurry
 

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