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Sep 20th, 2007 at 7:49am

Layne.   Offline
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Hello,

this is my first rip this post and this is kinda what i think it is. YOu post the picture and people comment (harshly Grin ) on itand you re-upload the picture following the directions and advice they give to make the screenshot better.

well here it the picture

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Reply #1 - Sep 20th, 2007 at 9:43am

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Right, I'll start with the things that could do with improvement, and finish with the good things;

Things that could do with improvement

The ground, in particular the grass, has a yellowish hue that is kinda off-putting
The sky colours are rather dull
There are not enough clouds for my tastes
There are a couple of pale-ish circles near bottom-centre that look kinda weird
You cut off half of one of the wheels on the right hand side




Good things

The angle is innovative
The aircraft is very detailed
I love the way the sun looms out over the top of the wing and fuselage
Linking to the aforementioned sun, the raindrops around that area look very nice


Overall, this shot really only needs a bit of tweaking to be a great image. Cheesy
 

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Reply #2 - Sep 20th, 2007 at 5:59pm

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ill re-upload the post a bit later after school Wink Then we will have a beauty
 

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Reply #3 - Sep 20th, 2007 at 10:04pm

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Overall an interesting shot to look at. I've never been crazy about any type of unrealistic distortion in either aircraft or scenery though. I'm betting you could achieve the same perspective and drama without stretching the fuselage as much. Good eye for creating a unique style though.  Smiley
 

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Reply #4 - Sep 21st, 2007 at 1:00am

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Blame wilco for that i didnt stretch it at all Undecided
 

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Reply #5 - Sep 21st, 2007 at 4:05pm

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Please ignore me, but I think the ground colour and runway look  very 'sunny' and the angle on the plane is excellent, very 'leaping into the sky"-ish. The plane looks a bit flat and overexposed to me though, and the scenery is lacking detail,  sky could have a few more clouds, though the clear sunny sky goes well  with the sunny runway. I think this is pretty good, with an unusual look colourwise...
 

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