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Sep 13th, 2007 at 12:45pm
|Alex|   Ex Member

 
Afternoon all  Wink

I don't usually do all to much regarding photography, but heres a picture I took (and edited, so not sure where to put it?  Huh)

Tell me if you like it, constructive criticism please!

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<EDIT> Can't spell  Grin
 
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Reply #1 - Sep 13th, 2007 at 2:39pm

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Nice sense of autums...  Smiley
 

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Reply #2 - Sep 13th, 2007 at 4:03pm
|Alex|   Ex Member

 
Omag 2.0 wrote on Sep 13th, 2007 at 2:39pm:
Nice sense of autums...  Smiley

Thanks Omag  Smiley

BTW heres the original  Smiley

Cheers,
Alex
 
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Reply #3 - Sep 14th, 2007 at 10:10am

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Constructively only...........looks like you killed all the shadow detail with too much contrast...........be more selective when you make manips so that you don't bring down the overall information level from the original.........

I would have reworked the image a bit lighter in the dark areas, like this..........

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Reply #4 - Sep 15th, 2007 at 9:33am

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very unique view Smiley I like it
 
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Reply #5 - Sep 15th, 2007 at 11:56am

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Rifleman wrote on Sep 14th, 2007 at 10:10am:
Constructively only...........looks like you killed all the shadow detail with too much contrast...........be more selective when you make manips so that you don't bring down the overall information level from the original.........

I would have reworked the image a bit lighter in the dark areas, like this..........

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Hmm... personally I think that the original version was better, as the dark area's don't draw the attention away from the main feel of the shot. It intensifies the shot. The grassleaves showing give it a more mundane atmosphere... The first one is more artistic.

But in the end, it all boils down to personal taste I guess...


 

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