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Aug 21st, 2007 at 1:20am

chrism7262   Offline
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hey all. thought i try simething a little different but i dont know if it turned out alright. let me know!  Grin

any suggestions are appreciated!!

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Reply #1 - Aug 21st, 2007 at 1:24am

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Very good Very good Cheesy Here's a few things to try.

Try adding a heat wave thingy from the back engine for some realism (Edit - JUst found  you have this but make it more noticable)

Maybe a bit of smoke from the engine (Maybe to hard)

And try and make the lighting on the plane a bit darker because the backing looks like it's foggy or rainy.

Grin
 

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Reply #2 - Aug 21st, 2007 at 1:32am

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Great plane, love flying the Hawk.  But I don't really think that it blends in with the pic you chose.  But keep going.
 
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Reply #3 - Aug 21st, 2007 at 1:41am

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Pretty darn good, Chris! You're getting to be pretty good, M8!

Suggestions, by way of trying to be helpful:

1) Put a visible canopy on it.

2) You might try a bit of a top crop and see how that looks to you.

3) Mess around and see if you can get it to blend a little better. There's no formula, you just have to try stuff and see if it seems to make it better or worse. Some things to mess with are saturation, brightness, contrast, hue, color balance. It can be real tricky and sometimes just a real small change is all that is needed. Everyone gets better at that with time.  Wink

Nice to see you posting! Keep up the good work!  Smiley

Cheers,
Don

P.S. Nice background image!  Wink
 
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Reply #4 - Aug 21st, 2007 at 8:14am

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Quote:
Very good Very good Cheesy Here's a few things to try.

Try adding a heat wave thingy from the back engine for some realism (Edit - JUst found  you have this but make it more noticable)

Maybe a bit of smoke from the engine (Maybe to hard)

And try and make the lighting on the plane a bit darker because the backing looks like it's foggy or rainy.

Grin



Its always foggy and rainy in the city Grin
 
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Reply #5 - Aug 21st, 2007 at 11:42am

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haha no it doesnt now that i look at it, looks like i pasted it right in!!  Grin i'll work on that thanks for the help once again Don!! also to layne i'll work on the exhaust  Cheesy
 
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Reply #6 - Aug 22nd, 2007 at 9:02am

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Cool job m8  Lips Sealed
 

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