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Screenshot Critique: Airbus by night (Read 492 times)
Aug 12th, 2007 at 11:21pm

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C&C welcome, I would really like someone to crack down on my goods and my bads. Tell me what I'm doing well, and what I can improve on.
 
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Reply #1 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 1:08am

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Pretty good. Wink Too zoomed in for a night shot IMO. I kinda like it.

TIP: If you want to do a close up at night you should remember that it should have adequate lighting. Try to put the plane somewhere where there is airport lights or something to light up the plane.

 

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Reply #2 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 4:01am

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All the above plus switch on the aircraft's lights ... if you would have some lights in the flight deck that would be really nice.

Plus, I think your shot is too compressed; you're only using 30 of the 100kb that are allowed here.
 

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Reply #3 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 8:17am
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What model is that? Cool
 
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Reply #4 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 3:34pm

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Nice shot, but perhaps a bit more interesting secenery in the backround and a little bit more light. I also just can't stand airbuses.  Angry
 

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Reply #5 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 4:16pm
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Double_Farvel wrote on Aug 13th, 2007 at 3:34pm:
Nice shot, but perhaps a bit more interesting secenery in the backround and a little bit more light. I also just can't stand airbuses.  Angry


Hmmm.....  Roll Eyes

I hate Boeings...

Not.

Good lord people they are aircraft manufacturers. Grow up!
 
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