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Screenshot Critique: Everything Learned (Read 674 times)
Aug 11th, 2007 at 10:03pm

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Two shots. I tried to put everything I have learned into these shots.

Rip them and tell me what you think?

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Reply #1 - Aug 11th, 2007 at 10:10pm

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Wow.. they're really great... #2 is brilliant!
 

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Reply #2 - Aug 12th, 2007 at 2:42am

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is that the PC12 by Flight1?
i am waiting for it to come out on FSX.. this is my favorite plane of all!  Cool

i don't remember this livery. (had it on 2004)
 

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Reply #3 - Aug 12th, 2007 at 10:49am

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Shocked WOW! These are fantastic shots mate ... I really like them!

You have a very sharp aircraft (very cool model!) and your ground textures are also really good but if there is one thing that could be improved (slightly) it would be your clouds and fog layers. They are nice but they could be a little more defined, more 3D. The cloud shapes are good but to me they miss depth and color. They only seem to have some shades of white and clouds range from deep grey to bright white.

I don't want to advertise my own shots while commenting on your, but take a look here to see what I mean.
 

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Reply #4 - Aug 12th, 2007 at 12:14pm

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This plane is the TBM 700. One of my best planes in my hanger. Wink Thanks Harold. I tried to do everything I can about the clouds but i don't have any cloud addons ar anything to enhance them so that's the best I got. Cheesy
 

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Reply #5 - Aug 12th, 2007 at 5:12pm

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Really sweet, M8!  Smiley

Which editor are you using?
 
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Reply #6 - Aug 12th, 2007 at 6:48pm

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Kleen Harry wrote on Aug 12th, 2007 at 5:12pm:
Really sweet, M8!  Smiley

Which editor are you using?


What do you mean by editor. All my shots are unedited and comprised of freeware. You will rarely see me do payware and edited shots. Wink
 

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Reply #7 - Aug 12th, 2007 at 9:02pm

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Oh! Harold mentioned cloud and fog layers so I thought you must be editing using "layers"! Great captures, M8!  Smiley
 
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Reply #8 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 3:50am

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Kleen Harry wrote on Aug 12th, 2007 at 9:02pm:
Harold mentioned cloud and fog layers so I thought you must be editing using "layers"!

He's obviously more of a graphics artist than a pilot Grin
 

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Reply #9 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 5:24am

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kind of reminded me of the Pilatus PC12.. a second look reveals more difference.

is there a model for FSX? i've searched here and on Avsim.
 

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Reply #10 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 5:48am
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One little tip from Soui then... To create more depth in these kind of settings press the - key once... It'll allow you to get a slightly more deep image. Can be done verey subtle:

http://www.simviation.com/yabbuploads/faaq5.jpg
 
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Reply #11 - Aug 13th, 2007 at 3:22pm

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Which are you, Harold? More of a pilot or more of a graphic artist? It's not obvious!  Wink Grin Smiley
 
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