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Jul 28th, 2007 at 7:57pm

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hey. this is my second go at this and this one focuses more on the scenery aspect. the bachground and the hornets on deck is a real photo, but the T-45, F-14 and the Hornet that just launched are added in.

it still needs work any suggestions are appreciated!!

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Reply #1 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 8:31pm

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Hey, hey, Chris! Quite excellent for your second one! You are way ahead of the curve, M8! It looks beautiful!  Smiley

To receive suggestions, you will probably need to have a larger image as it's difficult to see detail in one of this size. However, the overall image is great! At this point all I can say is, "Keep makin 'em!"

You have a good eye for color and composition. That can really be the hardest part. Most of the rest is just technical skill which is acquired over time. Color and composition are more "intuitive" and are difficult to acquire a sense for if it doesn't come naturally.  Wink

Keep makin 'em an postin 'em, Chris! Most of all, have fun! If we stop having fun with this stuff then we've lost our way somewhere.  Smiley

Tallyho!
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Reply #2 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 8:57pm

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hey thanks a lot!! i know what you mean i have a great time doing things like this. i'm working on one now thats a carrier landing. i have the background all set up already, i just dont know which plane to use. what do you think?
 
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Reply #3 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 10:09pm

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Hey, Chris, the flame on the Hornet taking off needs more brightness.

But otherwise good job! Grin
 
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Reply #4 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 10:28pm

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k thanks for the help i'll try to fix it up  Smiley
 
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Reply #5 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 11:16pm

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I hope you don't mind me tinkering with it, i just added some jet wash and slightly brightened the Afterburner.  Smiley Good job with it!
 
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Reply #6 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 11:20pm

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To dark add some yellow to the afterburner. Shocked

But great job anyhow. Wink
 
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Reply #7 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 11:33pm

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Reply #8 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 11:35pm

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Better add some blue as well.

Some more yellow more at the base.
 
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Reply #9 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 11:48pm

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I tried adding some blue and purple to it, but it was barely visible and ended up making the yellow\orange darker.
 
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Reply #10 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 11:55pm

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You can add
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around the afterburner.
Good so far.
 
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Reply #11 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 11:59pm

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yeah, i'll try that in the morning Smiley its late and i'm off to bed.

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Reply #12 - Jul 28th, 2007 at 11:59pm

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oops.. sorry,
like this.

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Reply #13 - Jul 29th, 2007 at 12:02am

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chrism7262 wrote on Jul 28th, 2007 at 8:57pm:
hey thanks a lot!! i know what you mean i have a great time doing things like this. i'm working on one now thats a carrier landing. i have the background all set up already, i just dont know which plane to use. what do you think?


What's the pic of the carrier and background?
 
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Reply #14 - Jul 29th, 2007 at 12:16am

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hey that looks great. nah i dont mind at all nice job. on the one im making now its a dark blue dusk kind of setting and the back of the carrier deck. i was thinking a super hornet but i can make a few with the same background just different planes.
 
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