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Jul 11^th, 2007 at 6:11am

Elwood Offline
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This is my first edited screenshot - hope you like it!

comments please!

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Reply #1 - Jul 11^th, 2007 at 7:50am

Sytse Offline
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There's a lot of potential here!

You sure picked a difficult one to start off with. The plane needs lots of work and Anti-Aliassing. It's better to erase all the wires and draw them in yourself. The colour can use some touching up too, to match the background lighting. Apart from that, it's an awesome shot. The composition is fantastic and the whole setting is very nice and original.

Keep it up! Wink

Ps. Maybe try to crop off about an inch of the bottom. Of course, I do not know how much an inch is on your screen...

Experiment a bit with that. Wink

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Reply #2 - Jul 11^th, 2007 at 9:56am

Elwood Offline
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Thanks for your help Sytse!

I´ve made a new shot with not so difficult light conditions and a different plane:

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Reply #3 - Jul 11^th, 2007 at 4:59pm

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Woah both lovely compositions.. Just the jaggies to sort out imo and the rest of the battle is won, you have a good eye for a shot! Which editing program are you using?

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Reply #4 - Jul 12^th, 2007 at 8:36am