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Jul 1st, 2007 at 4:26pm

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Studio's been slow and I haven't posted a raw screen for a while so...
Rip this:

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Reply #1 - Jul 1st, 2007 at 9:34pm

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I really love this shot... the lighting and shadows were nailed. The scenery is awesome... cloud cover is just right... small village in the valley gives something else to look at apart from just the ranges... crafted looks great and is well lit...
Just one nit-pick which may be entirely personal... I would have positioned the craft slightly lower, nearer to the corner... to give the effect of the GR4 rushing past the viewer in a turn.
Very well composed shot Immelman.  Cool
 

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Reply #2 - Jul 1st, 2007 at 11:02pm

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Thanks mouse.  I spent a lot of time composing this one before i hit print screen so it's nice to hear you like it.
 
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Reply #3 - Jul 1st, 2007 at 11:18pm
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I concur with MOUSE. And one nit-pick from me aswell, the mountains in the distance seem a little blurred. Perhaps refreshing the scenery may help the textures load. Wink
 
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