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Soui's The Fly!! ( updated!!) (Read 145 times)
May 16th, 2007 at 7:22am
Souichiro   Ex Member

 
Cropped this little piece out of the original pic... Satisfied with the result!

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Hope you don't mind me posting all these pics But I really need you info/advice!




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Reply #1 - May 16th, 2007 at 8:58am
Björn   Ex Member

 
*Gets flyswatter*
 
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Reply #2 - May 16th, 2007 at 9:04am

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Whaddu call a fly with no wings....

Nice shot, I think a closer shot of the fly, without so much of the wall. Make your subject the focus on the screen (my opinion only of course).
 
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Reply #3 - May 16th, 2007 at 10:34pm

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I think it would have been more interesting if the fly were surrounded completely by the surface it's resting on... the white wall kind of suins it for me.
But flies are not the most cooperative models...!  Cheesy
 

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Reply #4 - May 17th, 2007 at 3:02am
Souichiro   Ex Member

 
I Cropped the pic like I would crop a screenie probably Grin

but after your feedback this is what I could do..


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I think it makes the fly look better!
 
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Reply #5 - May 17th, 2007 at 5:21am

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Yeah, but unfortuantely it's lost detail and gone all grainy, shame really, but good try
 
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