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May 14th, 2007 at 10:55pm

ThatOnePerson   Offline
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I'm not to sure about the lighting but ill give it a go since I haven't posted a composite in a while Roll Eyes

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Reply #1 - May 14th, 2007 at 11:21pm

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Looks good, but if I could suggest some tweaks they would be:
1. Plane should be seen from slightly higher angle.
2. Look at the shadows in the mountain tops. The light is coming from roughly the
    2 o'clock position (top right). The light on your plane seems to be from the top left of the image.

It is fun to look at though!
 

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Reply #2 - May 15th, 2007 at 5:26am

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Nice, but I'd have to agree with Bajan. The perspective of the plane doesn't match that of the background. The right wing should be pointing to the horizon.
 
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Reply #3 - May 15th, 2007 at 10:49am

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Neat edit!

IMHO the plane looks too small...kinda like a R/C plane or toy.  I love the background!
 

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