Search the archive:
YaBB - Yet another Bulletin Board
 
   
 
Page Index Toggle Pages: 1
Send Topic Print
Rules of Engagement Comic (Read 300 times)
Apr 22nd, 2007 at 3:23am

MOUSY   Offline
Colonel
The artist formerly known
as: Mouse Ace
Commonwealth of Dominica

Gender: male
Posts: 2117
*****
 
Posted this edit in the StudioV Forum for the recent Edit This! Competiton. Wanna put it here in order to get as much feedback as possible... please tell me what could have been improved on... This is my first real try at an actual "edit" of an image...

The original:

...

Part of this was also used:

...

My comic result:

...

Thanks for looking and please remember to tell me what you think...
 

HP HDX 16 | Centrino2 2.26Ghz | 4GB DDR2 | Nvidia GT130 1GB DDR2 | 500GB HDD
IP Logged
 
Reply #1 - Apr 22nd, 2007 at 3:55pm

krigl   Offline
Colonel
Flightsim did me in.

Gender: male
Posts: 8255
*****
 
I  like the pic, very comicsy, the title is good and the slogan cryptic but gung-ho thriller sounding... but the blobby overlay - I don't know how to describe it - detracts from the final effect - it eats a lot of detail... perhaps it's too sharp or needs to be more opaque?
 

If you're bored of an evening - and you'll have to be - you can check out my screenshot gallery: Kriglsflightsimscreens...HERE

...
 
IP Logged
 
Reply #2 - Apr 23rd, 2007 at 5:48pm

MOUSY   Offline
Colonel
The artist formerly known
as: Mouse Ace
Commonwealth of Dominica

Gender: male
Posts: 2117
*****
 
Appreciate the critique krigl... was beginning to think my edit sucked majorly... LOL... Grin

I tried to get the printing-press-like finish from a tutorial I read on the net... I guess I do kinda see what you're saying.... Thanks again though... I'll put your comments to use... sooner or later... Wink
 

HP HDX 16 | Centrino2 2.26Ghz | 4GB DDR2 | Nvidia GT130 1GB DDR2 | 500GB HDD
IP Logged
 
Page Index Toggle Pages: 1
Send Topic Print