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Apr 19th, 2007 at 4:20am

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Hello all

I know this is not the best of edits infact its pretty crap but im fairly new to the whole wide world of editing so any tips and comments would be muchly appreciated Wink

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Reply #1 - Apr 19th, 2007 at 6:37am

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Personally, I rarely use lens flare, so that looks a bit weird to me. If you want to use it, dont make it as bright so it won't be very distracting. Other than that, it looks pretty good. Keep at it!  Wink
 

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Reply #2 - Apr 19th, 2007 at 8:59am

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I like the lens flare Cheesy.

But the lighting is weird with the circle around the plane...it looks like part of the sky is dark and the other is light Huh Tongue.  I see what you were trying to do, but I think that's just a bit TOO dramatic...try to get dynamic lighting without ruining the reality of the shot...

Great job there Cool.

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Reply #3 - Apr 21st, 2007 at 2:24am

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Whoa i like it thats really cool but i must agree the sky looks a little weird with a quarter dark and the rest bright!  Cool : Wink
 

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Reply #4 - Apr 21st, 2007 at 4:05am

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Nice...but why does it have it's landing lights on when it's parked up at the terminal Wink

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Reply #5 - Apr 21st, 2007 at 4:42am
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w00t more mis-use of lensflare...

if the lensflare wasnt their it would look better
 
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Reply #6 - Apr 21st, 2007 at 5:07am

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Quote:
w00t more mis-use of lensflare...

if the lensflare wasnt their it would look better


I think also the lens flare would have looked better if you had just used the bloom bit in the middle and not had the random ring around the outside Wink

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Reply #7 - Apr 21st, 2007 at 5:17am
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Mictheslik wrote on Apr 21st, 2007 at 5:07am:
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w00t more mis-use of lensflare...

if the lensflare wasnt their it would look better


I think also the lens flare would have looked better if you had just used the bloom bit in the middle and not had the random ring around the outside Wink

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or not at all
 
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Reply #8 - Apr 21st, 2007 at 6:52am
Tweek   Ex Member

 
I used lens flare in this shot for the lights:

http://www.simviation.com/yabbuploads/tweek747night.jpg

Can't remember what settings, but you really need to tone it down so it doesn't completely stand out and ruin the shot.

Never overdo things, unless you're going for an abstract look.
 
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Reply #9 - Apr 21st, 2007 at 5:02pm

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I like it even though it's a bit OTT.  Very creative  Smiley  The reflection of the mountain and trees in the window gives it an added dimension, and the ultra-bright lights convey the feeling of having them shining right in your face.... the dark shading is too extreme at top left for me though, and from the other replies I guess this shot didn't hit the spot with a lot of people....

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