Not a bad first edit, all you really needed to do was make it a little bit bigger & change the F-16's to Migs. I like the way the F-16's are diving in & the A-10 is climbing out, nice contrast.

Don't worry about the some of the comments, just take them as constructive criticism, which is what they are. Next time you are planning a shot just think about whats happening in the shot & why - 'Are people going to ask why the T-birds are shooting down an A-10?', the answer is yes, of course they will.

Cheers,

TSC.