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Screenshot Critique: Takeoff (Read 312 times)
Mar 28th, 2007 at 7:40pm

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The original backround pic was a bit compressed to begin to with, but I liked the edit enough where I decided I should post it. What do you guys think of it? Just something quick.  Wink

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Reply #1 - Mar 28th, 2007 at 7:56pm

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The only thing I can say is that the heat blur looks like it is just a guassian blur. If you haven't already check out this tut. Make sure to add some ocean ripple and use the blur tool to make it blend. Just some suggestions Wink
 

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Reply #2 - Mar 29th, 2007 at 1:00pm

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The clouds don't look real...they're too yellow...never seen that type of cumulus any color other than white.  I'd suggest making them whiter...and then I think it'll look much better Wink.

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