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Early Morning Practice (Read 362 times)
Mar 11th, 2007 at 9:07pm

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Two German F-86's practice very low in the early morn'

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Tell me what could be better
 

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Reply #1 - Mar 11th, 2007 at 9:19pm

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nice one just a few things though, the aircraft to the left is to blurred and perhaps a different background as you can see the sprinklers on the ground and it makes the aircraft look small  Wink
 

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Reply #2 - Mar 11th, 2007 at 9:23pm

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Ok thanks the sprinkler was kind of a hinderance but the shot was so perfect Wink
 

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Reply #3 - Mar 11th, 2007 at 9:55pm

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great shot  Smiley
also i noticed that the cockpit on the F-86 on the right isn't transparent.
you could go to the trouble of layering it and all that,
but what you could do is just move the F-86 down a little and then add some reflection to it.

i'm obsessed with water lol Roll Eyes
its absolutly B-e-a-utiful in this one!

another thing that takes a little away from the shot is that the F-86's aren't the same livery,
i dont know if you meant to do that, it just makes the shot a little bit awkward.

one way you could fix the size problem is put the two birds off in the distance, perhaps flying over the water?
Just not so far that we can't see the detail on those beauties!

Still a great edit Cloud9flyer!
 

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