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Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two (Read 340 times)
Mar 7th, 2007 at 5:16am
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Improving? What can I improve more?
 
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Reply #1 - Mar 7th, 2007 at 7:57am

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You certainly are improving, but as for offering any tips i'm not sure.
 

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Reply #2 - Mar 7th, 2007 at 8:08am

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Those are great shots. The only thing I can say is get some different angles. The last three are almost the same angle.
 

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Reply #3 - Mar 7th, 2007 at 10:08am

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Ok, I think 2 is better than 1, seems to me to get the right balance between detailed plane and lovely scenery. Great pic! Of the second set, I think no 4 is the worst because of the tilt of the horizon. It makes it look as if the plane is climbing at a horribly steep angle. The 5th is probably the best of the 3 because the runway is in there and the angle looks okay. But it seems to me as if the runway should be somehow further to the left, as it seems directly behind the plane, yet the plane's already turned quite a lot. I hope that's helpful!?  Smiley
 

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Reply #4 - Mar 7th, 2007 at 4:42pm

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I agree that you need different angles, it's more interesting for a viewer if there is a lot of variety.
 
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Reply #5 - Mar 8th, 2007 at 4:22am

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very very noice  Cool
 

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Reply #6 - Mar 8th, 2007 at 6:24am

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matt2190 wrote on Mar 7th, 2007 at 8:08am:
Those are great shots. The only thing I can say is get some different angles. The last three are almost the same angle.


I think that's deliberate - he wanted us to tell him which of the similar shots is better and why.... but he didn't say so, so who knows  Cool
 

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