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Feb 24th, 2007 at 5:41am

Mictheslik   Offline
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Just a compositve I've been working on for the SSA.com edit this competition. Any comments critisizm would be welcome Smiley

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Reply #1 - Feb 24th, 2007 at 5:53am
Tweek   Ex Member

 
I think it's main shortfall is the lighting. If you look, the sun is behind the aircraft, yet the light is concentrated on the left hand side, with relatively little falling on the right.

You must take this into account when you take the original shot, so it doesn't look out of place in the real picture.

Hope this helps. Wink
 
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Reply #2 - Feb 24th, 2007 at 5:56am

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I spent a lot of time with the dodge and burn on this one trying to make it look right...actually the sun is slightly offset to one side, but maybe I overdid it a little Wink Thanks for the comment Cheesy

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Reply #3 - Feb 24th, 2007 at 4:11pm

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Very nicely cut out, cool shot. As said, a bit too much light on the lower left side, but still  Cool
 

If you're bored of an evening - and you'll have to be - you can check out my screenshot gallery: Kriglsflightsimscreens...HERE

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Reply #4 - Feb 25th, 2007 at 9:54am

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I think it is absolutely spot on, right lighting,christal clear,perfect. Wink
 
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Reply #5 - Feb 25th, 2007 at 11:47am
|Alex|   Ex Member

 
Sorry, but I think the position of the aircraft takes something away from the rest of the picture. Other than that, the way it's composed, and the lighting is beautiful  Cool

Maybe just work on having a more realistic pitch for the 737  Wink
 
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