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Screenshot Critique: Morning Mission (Read 641 times)
Feb 10th, 2007 at 9:59am

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Reply #1 - Feb 10th, 2007 at 10:01am

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You've got a nice idea here, but the planes just don't fit.  They look like someone stuck them on Lips Sealed (I wonder why...Tongue).  I think it's the lighting...it doesn't blend.  Not sure really how you could fix it though...try darkening the planes.

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Reply #2 - Feb 10th, 2007 at 11:35am

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I agree, with the sun in the back, where does the light illuminating the top of the planes come from?
But a good idea!
 
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Reply #3 - Feb 11th, 2007 at 4:57am

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I think the lighting matches pretty good. It's the colour that messes up the blending. Try making the P38s more yellow than white.
 
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Reply #4 - Feb 11th, 2007 at 6:45am

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I think the lighting and overall compostion shows potential. I agree that the aircraft look placed and their attitude is unrealistic. One more thing, i'd probably want to leave out the UFO next time around.. Wink

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Reply #5 - Feb 11th, 2007 at 9:25am

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Wow, didnt even notice that.... Undecided
 
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Reply #6 - Feb 11th, 2007 at 10:22am

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Farvel, keep going in this intense, color rich  lighting direction. I honestly think you were really close to a phenomenal edit here.  Smiley
 
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Reply #7 - Feb 11th, 2007 at 3:03pm

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I like the composition and background, but as was said, they look stuck on, the lighting's strange, their colour doesn't fit....

Better than my work though Roll Eyes

But this doesn't have to be the finished product, does it  Wink

Why not try darkening and yellowing the planes a bit and repost!  Smiley
 
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