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Jan 19^th, 2007 at 12:36pm

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Reply #1 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 1:17pm

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The E-3 AWACS is a little dark in the second shot but....

I LIKE'EM!!! Grin

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Reply #2 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 1:40pm

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Love them I might have a use for some of them. Wink

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Reply #3 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 2:16pm

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1. Very cool! I like it a lot. The pilot is a bit high on the approach, but I don't blame him in this kind of weather...

2. It doesn't work for me. It's too blue and the plane is too dark. The string of clouds in the background looks a bit weird too.

3. Interesting shot. One major issue is the composition. Next time, try to bring the tail closer to the edge than the nose. Also, there are two lines in your picture, the aircraft and the horizon. They are both running straight trough the middle of the picture. However, a picture looks nice when your eyes can follow some diagonal line in it. So if you could just tilt one or both lines 45°, I think that would help.

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Reply #4 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 3:00pm

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1: The landing light beam and the yellowness disturb the image.

2: No objections/suggestions. Good one!

3: I smell a copy of the pic I did in Strike Fighters. Cheesy

Rotate it by 90° to the left for a less confusing view. Wink

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Reply #5 - Jan 19^th, 2007 at 11:32pm

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i like the first one alot but i dont like the ring around the nose of the aircraft Wink

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Reply #6 - Jan 20^th, 2007 at 10:27am

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CSM wrote on Jan 19^th, 2007 at 11:32pm:

i like the first one alot but i dont like the ring around the nose of the aircraft Wink

I agree the first one is very special, but that ring takes a little of the gloss of the overall appearance, bloody great though

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Reply #7 - Jan 22^nd, 2007 at 11:43am

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#1: LOVING it except for that ring around the nose...what is it Huh

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#2: Clouds, sky, and sun are GREAT...but the plane is too dark. It needs to be just a tad lighter so you can see some details instead of being just a black shape.

#3: I love the details on the plane, but the horizon line is too bland Embarrassed

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Reply #8 - Jan 23^rd, 2007 at 8:16pm

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FSGT Gabe wrote on Jan 22^nd, 2007 at 11:43am:

#1: LOVING it except for that ring around the nose...what is it Huh

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It's the landing lights. The snow makes the light beam show up. Cheesy

By the way, great shots Tom. Cool

Is the first shot the IRIS Eagle? Huh

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Reply #9 - Jan 24^th, 2007 at 1:50am

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Yep it is the Iris F-15D

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Reply #10 - Jan 24^th, 2007 at 6:46am

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First one very nice, but first thing I thought was 'too high'. I'm not sure if the landing light would look like that.
Second is great. Perhaps as said more detail on the plane, but wonderful colours.
Third one okay, the skin on that bird looks awesome.

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Reply #11 - Jan 24^th, 2007 at 4:32pm

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At first i thought the a/c was going supersonic in the first shot. Tongue

Overall, shots are really amazing

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Reply #12 - Jan 24^th, 2007 at 4:48pm

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I think the 1st two are great, both really nice. Dunno why, but the third one doesnt do anything for me...

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