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Jan 7th, 2007 at 4:22pm

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This is my first real attempt at a composition.  I used a freeware program called paint.net.
Tell me what you think.

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I cut it out of the screenshot, pasted it into the photo, resized, changed the transparency, and saturation, and straitedned some lines.
 
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Reply #1 - Jan 7th, 2007 at 6:22pm

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Looks nice. The colours could use some attention for better blending, but it's not too bad. But, why hide the plane in the corner?
 
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Reply #2 - Jan 7th, 2007 at 6:36pm

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That came from paying too much attention to the small details.  I was thinking that it would look like the plane was higher, otherwise it might look too low.  I know, stupid.
 
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Reply #3 - Jan 7th, 2007 at 6:36pm

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That looks very nice.
 

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Reply #4 - Jan 7th, 2007 at 9:38pm

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looking pretty good
 
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Reply #5 - Jan 9th, 2007 at 8:17am

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I think it's fine.
Composition means sometimes having your subject off-center; the hills in the opposite corner balance it nicely.
 

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