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Dec 20th, 2006 at 7:18am
Heathaze   Ex Member

 
I don't do many edits so it would be nice to see what you guys think of this one I've done please Smiley

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Reply #1 - Dec 20th, 2006 at 11:08am

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Love it....very in your face and it really shows off the bend in the F104 Smiley

Also gives a lovely sense of speed

One incy wincy bit of negative criticism would be that in my opinion the tail is too bright, apart from that an excellent job  Cheesy

Keep them coming Smiley

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Reply #2 - Dec 20th, 2006 at 1:47pm

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Drama, drama then more drama. I think it's electric, great sense of power and agression. Can't see much wrong with it apart from maybe finishing it off with an appropriate title..Nice stuff!!
 

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Reply #3 - Dec 20th, 2006 at 8:56pm
Heathaze   Ex Member

 
Cheers for that feedback Smiley
 
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