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Nov 24^th, 2006 at 6:20pm

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What do you think, any comments?

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Reply #1 - Nov 24^th, 2006 at 9:16pm

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Who am I to say, but it seems that it's been compressed too much. The unnatural coloration at the edges of the wings against the gradient sky give it a subsequently unnatural feel.

That is the sole factor that is keeping this from being breath-taking, at least that's the first thing I noticed, otherwise the composition is fairly good.

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Reply #2 - Nov 25^th, 2006 at 4:08am

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What an awsome sky! Shocked

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Reply #3 - Nov 25^th, 2006 at 6:04am

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It's waaaaayyy too compressed, but the sky is very misterous, and the plane is very detailed, and that contrast makes it really beautiful

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Reply #4 - Nov 25^th, 2006 at 6:49pm

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What I praise:
- fantastic vibrant sky
- lovely choice of model and paint

What I would have done:
- more clouds (probably only cirrus are necessary; as is)
- higher cirrus if not above 40,000 (they don't seem like that to me)
- higher angled perspective to accomodate more zoom (since the aircraft is quite almost the only focus) while keeping a portion of the horizon in view.
- later time of dawn to facilitate less contrast on the aircraft (but this case is ok since later dawns produce less virbant colours)

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