Second one isn't reallly good at all. The plane is cut off to much to show any of it's interesting features properly.. there is to little of the airport lighting nor is there anything interesting to see in the background. The only thing slightly interesting are the cockpit lights.

To end with positivism..

The first one is almost brilliant! I only think you chose the wrong time of day... Since I think these type of shots work better in daytime. Also your perspective is just slightly to high. It just cut of a bit of your lefthand corner tire.. ( right hand if you're in the plane.) Somehow I think it disturbs the pic a bit.

nothing much to say about the first one...
I mean nothing more

for the second one, I would have change the camera position a little bit closer to the fuselage, and pan out to have the cockpit on the left of the pic and the runway lighting on the right/background.
and yes you produced better sky in other shots. you can surely work on that point.



vince