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Nov 7th, 2006 at 7:07pm

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Tis true, the previous edits I have done...don't count, these I tried on  Grin

Approach into San Diego I believe
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Reply #1 - Nov 8th, 2006 at 7:03am

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That atmosphere in #2 is pretty cool indeed! Shocked
 

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Reply #2 - Nov 8th, 2006 at 10:33am

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#2 is a great attempt. The aircraft is very well cut out, nice smooth edges etc.

A photo paint would really help it look more realistic, default paints can be impossible to work with Grin Also i would try using a higher res. backround image, yours is kinda grainy...
One more thing, the lense flare. It would looks great to have it on one of the engines, but not all four (is that even possible???, i honestly don't know, just looks a bit off)

Other than that though great, lots of potential you got there! Look forward to your next one Wink
 

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Reply #3 - Nov 8th, 2006 at 2:34pm

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#2 is a great attempt. The aircraft is very well cut out, nice smooth edges etc.

A photo paint would really help it look more realistic, default paints can be impossible to work with Grin Also i would try using a higher res. backround image, yours is kinda grainy...
One more thing, the lense flare. It would looks great to have it on one of the engines, but not all four (is that even possible???, i honestly don't know, just looks a bit off)

Other than that though great, lots of potential you got there! Look forward to your next one Wink


Ty, preciate the critism, always helps to improve images  Grin

But yea, I had this shot from awhile back, and decided to edit it, I'll get a better paint etc.   Smiley
 

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