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Honest Opinnion please... (Read 237 times)

Oct 12^th, 2006 at 3:25pm

Nemo. Ex Member

of this song: Baby.

the song was put together earlier on today by myself (on keyboards and the drums) and my mum who wany was singing (and has got a throat infection).

was just done as a bit of fun, but any comments would be grately appreciated.

Nemo.......

edit.... i know there's no video, it wouldn't play as a .wav file at all, so its as a .wmv

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Reply #1 - Oct 12^th, 2006 at 5:23pm

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It sounds like 1980's pop. It's a catchy tune, but it desperately needs a bridge and an outro. Even though the melody is catchy and definately hummable, it wears on the listener as it's repeated through the entire song. But it's a good melody, you just need to refine the song, that's all.

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Reply #2 - Oct 12^th, 2006 at 6:38pm

Souichiro Ex Member

Keyboard is a few notes to low... The song is too cheerfull for the keyboard.. The Piano needs to be replaced with a more electrical sounding sound..

What Dc said above.. needs finetuning...

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