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Sep 5th, 2006 at 2:03pm
lilley   Ex Member

 
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Real Air Spitfire
Freeware Cemetary found on the V

If anyone can think of a better message to go at the bottom, or a way to improve at all, dont hesitate to comment

james
 
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Reply #1 - Sep 5th, 2006 at 5:27pm
born_2_fly   Ex Member

 
The atmosphere is great, and I don't think you need to change a thing with the message. Really, strikes a chord. Fantastic shots James! Keep it up, this should go in the gallery.

|Alex|
 
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Reply #2 - Sep 5th, 2006 at 5:38pm
Souichiro   Ex Member

 
I'd liked to have the viewpoint a bit lower to cut out the grounds behind the main object which is the cemetary..

The text doesn't sound right mainly becasue you mixed up the past tense in " fought" and the present tense with " deserve" the latter should be deserved.. I'll think of an alternate text if you want

 
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Reply #3 - Sep 6th, 2006 at 10:21am
born_2_fly   Ex Member

 
Freedom the "deserve" does make sense, as in the freedom they deserve to enjoy by being alive, but lost by dieing, fighting for our freedom. No?

|Alex|
 
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Reply #4 - Sep 6th, 2006 at 11:47am
lilley   Ex Member

 
Alex you hit the nail on the head there

what the message is saying is that they have fought and died for freedom, a freedon that they deserve to be a part of, however this is not possible, i know it sounds like th tenses are mixed up but it says what i want it to when you think about it closely.

however, if you can think of anything better that i can use, then please do post it and i can see what i can do.

cheers
james
 
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