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a Tribute (Read 477 times)
Sep 5
th
, 2006 at 2:03pm
lilley
Ex Member
Real Air Spitfire
Freeware Cemetary found on the V
If anyone can think of a better message to go at the bottom, or a way to improve at all, dont hesitate to comment
james
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Sep 5
th
, 2006 at 5:27pm
born_2_fly
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The atmosphere is great, and I don't think you need to change a thing with the message. Really, strikes a chord. Fantastic shots James! Keep it up, this should go in the gallery.
|Alex|
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Sep 5
th
, 2006 at 5:38pm
Souichiro
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I'd liked to have the viewpoint a bit lower to cut out the grounds behind the main object which is the cemetary..
The text doesn't sound right mainly becasue you mixed up the past tense in " fought" and the present tense with " deserve" the latter should be deserved.. I'll think of an alternate text if you want
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Sep 6
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, 2006 at 10:21am
born_2_fly
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Freedom the "deserve" does make sense, as in the freedom they deserve to enjoy by being alive, but lost by dieing, fighting for our freedom. No?
|Alex|
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Sep 6
th
, 2006 at 11:47am
lilley
Ex Member
Alex you hit the nail on the head there
what the message is saying is that they have fought and died for freedom, a freedon that they deserve to be a part of, however this is not possible, i know it sounds like th tenses are mixed up but it says what i want it to when you think about it closely.
however, if you can think of anything better that i can use, then please do post it and i can see what i can do.
cheers
james
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