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Aug 22^nd, 2006 at 9:41pm

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ok guys this is my first real screenshot edit ever. so let me know what u think!

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Reply #1 - Aug 22^nd, 2006 at 10:08pm

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A little too much blurring for me.

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Reply #2 - Aug 22^nd, 2006 at 10:31pm

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Definitely too much... Maybe streaking the scenery sideways while leaving the craft in focus like you already have would have given the feeling of a speedy landing. Don't know if thats what you were going for but it would have helped. Nice try though.

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Reply #3 - Aug 22^nd, 2006 at 10:36pm

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how do I make the lights all sparkly

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Reply #4 - Aug 22^nd, 2006 at 10:46pm

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i think it would have been better if you ahd made the plane more distinct. Maybe not blur the landing gear?

nice first try though.

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Reply #5 - Aug 23^rd, 2006 at 7:39am

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Really great shot, only thing I would suggest is to 'stay-in-the-lines-more' as some of the blur has made its way onto the fuselage. But other than that, nice shot. 8)

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Reply #6 - Aug 23^rd, 2006 at 12:55pm

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Too much heat blur. Turboprops really don't even have any visible unless it's the right lighting.

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Reply #7 - Aug 23^rd, 2006 at 12:58pm

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how do I make the lights all sparkly

You should get Nick's LightFix 2... very cool effects and courtesy of our very own Nick Needham!

About the shot: I think this has a very nice 'painting' feel over it ... but I think it doesn't belong in the Gallery.
Remember: only the very best shots should go in the Gallery and I know you can do better Wink

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