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Aug 2nd, 2006 at 5:44am
PisTon   Ex Member

 
Hey all
Can you guys please give me suggestions on how to improve my shots? I think they're already great, but not Contest Winners.

Any advice given is Welcome!

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Again, all critisism is welcome!

bye

EDIT: The resolution is strange, since I cropped slightly to get the weather updates gone.
 
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Reply #1 - Aug 2nd, 2006 at 6:12am

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hi piston,

first keep on using cathay pacific aircraft!!! you're sure I will vote for you that way... Wink Wink

then, I have probably read eno's lighting tutorial...

on the first shot, there is not enough light on the A/C, either switching on the landing lights or changing the time of the day would have helped.
exactly the oposite on the 4th shot, too much light, plus the long building shadows, which I find very disturbing.

the 2nd shot angle is a bit weird, imo. and too dark as a whole. there is no highlight. a flat shot.

I like all of them, the 1st and 3rd more than the others. the 3rd shot is well balanced, the only thing to change would be the horizon line, it's better placed in the 1st or 2nd third of the picture. but not in the middle. that's a tip coming from photography.
in the 1st shot you can feel the action...

the clouds are nice.

good shots as a whole.
that my very own opinion, others may disagree, and I'm not expert...

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Reply #2 - Aug 2nd, 2006 at 9:52am

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The only think I can think of is to give alittle more lead room, put more spacing between the nose of the aircraft and the border, makes it look alittle nicer Wink

I personally think that 2nd shot is brilliant, would be near perfect if the houses on the ground weren't glowing in a radioactive sorta way, but thats the simulator's limitations, not yours Wink

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