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May 21st, 2006 at 5:51pm

Peanut1234   Offline
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hey guys,

this is my first edit, not too good, so don't expect much. compression killed this one.

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A tired, old Tripacer limps home to Tucson


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High Flight Oh! I have slipped the surly bonds of earth And danced the skies on laughter-silvered wings; Sunward I've climbed, and joined the tumbling mirth Of sun-split clouds - and done a hundred things You have not dreamed of - wheeled and soared and swung High in the sunlit silence. Hov'ring there I've chased the shouting wind along, and flung My eager craft through footless halls of air. Up, up the long delirious, burning blue, I've topped the windswept heights with easy grace Where never lark, or even eagle flew - And, while with silent lifting mind I've trod The high untresspassed sanctity of space, Put out my hand and touched the face of God.&&
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Reply #1 - May 21st, 2006 at 8:28pm

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Looks great except for the compression. Try changing the font texture it blends into the backgound a little.
 

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Reply #2 - May 21st, 2006 at 11:28pm

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Quote:
A tired, old Tripacer limps home to Tucson


Thats where i live!  lol its good for a first, keep em comming!
 

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Reply #3 - May 23rd, 2006 at 5:34pm

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Looking good. Keep it up! Wink
 
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