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Tail Shot at dusk (Read 375 times)
Oct 21st, 2005 at 6:54pm

EirePlane   Offline
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Just a simple edit of one of my own paint schemes

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Reply #1 - Oct 22nd, 2005 at 3:11pm

flyboy 28   Offline
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Is that light on top supposed to be the sun?

If so, I'd suggest putting lighter colors around the top of it. It's not very often see red, red, red, sun, black! Wink


Just some constructive criticizm. Smiley
 
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Reply #2 - Oct 22nd, 2005 at 3:58pm

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light on top was just supposed to be some lens flare where the light hit something shiny, i suppose i could do without it  Smiley
 
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Reply #3 - Oct 22nd, 2005 at 4:09pm

flyboy 28   Offline
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Ah okay. Just drop it down so it connects to the tail. Wink
 
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Reply #4 - Oct 22nd, 2005 at 7:29pm

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Looks good but I agree lower the flare intensity or burn some of it out. Put a sun either rendered or real in the lower right corner so it looks like its  setting and you will have a winner. Not something I would have done on one of my own edits but I do get many "visions" from other peoples work.  Grin
 

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Reply #5 - Oct 24th, 2005 at 5:17pm

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oooh! I thought that was the beacon light there! lol
 
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Reply #6 - Oct 26th, 2005 at 6:30am
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Thats excellent, looks quite artistic, as opposed to photgraphic, which is a good thing! You've done well.


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