Simviation Forum - F4 Phantom: REVISED

Sep 14^th, 2005 at 12:10pm

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Comments appriciated.

Its a bit 'JPEGed' but Ok. Tell if you thinks its better or worse. Wink

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Reply #1 - Sep 14^th, 2005 at 1:07pm

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Amazing, that is truely an amazing edit! Shocked

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Reply #2 - Sep 14^th, 2005 at 1:20pm

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Gorgeous... Shocked

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Reply #3 - Sep 14^th, 2005 at 2:53pm

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The horizon to the left of the plane looks slightly odd being perfectly flat. It might actually be flat, but it looks strange to me.

Only constructive criticism, but that is one fantastic edit! Shocked

The scenery is amazing!

Wow, keep it up!

Jon

PS. Take the lens flare off as well Wink

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Reply #4 - Sep 14^th, 2005 at 2:54pm

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too bad this missed the AUG contest. 8)

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Reply #5 - Sep 14^th, 2005 at 3:10pm

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Thanks for the comments. Any ideas on how to make it better?

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Reply #6 - Sep 14^th, 2005 at 4:06pm

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Any ideas on how to make it better?

1) As I said, make the horizon less flat. It may be meant to be flat, but to me it looks wrong.

2) Take out the lens flare. Photographers try their hardest to not get lens flare, and then people go and put them in on edits! Nothing personal, I just don't like them at all.

Jon

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Reply #7 - Sep 15^th, 2005 at 4:57am

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I don't know about the lens flare... It looks cool, but it's missplaced. The real sun is behind the nose of the jet, just follow the lightrays.
And the horizon, well... it looks acceptable to me, but I think it should be blurred a bit. The contrast is too strong.
And now I'm really looking, I think the aircraft is a bit too light and off colour. Try darkening it a bit or use the burn tool (I you have it) and put a (slight!) colour layer over the whole picture. That might blend it a bit more...
Just talking about minor details here, it already looks awesome. Wink

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Reply #8 - Sep 16^th, 2005 at 11:36am

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Tell me if you think 2nd try is better.

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Reply #9 - Sep 16^th, 2005 at 11:57am

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Yup! A lot better now! Didn't realise the sun was already there. I thought you put a sun in with your lens flare in the first one. It's weird that the lightbeams do not point towards the sun, but to a location slightly lower and to the right, but I know you can't help it.
Good work! 8)

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