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DSB's Hawk over the desert (Read 220 times)
Apr 25th, 2005 at 10:52pm

xFLAMESx   Offline
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Hopefully the pics will do the talking...

Couple of Hawks doing a low inverted pass, somewhere in the desert...
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The original pic...
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Oh...it's my first edit since the beginning of Feb.
Comments and tips always welcome Smiley

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Reply #1 - Apr 26th, 2005 at 8:16am

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excellent edit carl! don't have any tips for ya, i really like it Grin
 

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Reply #2 - Apr 26th, 2005 at 11:18am

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Hey Carl, pretty sweet editing bro, here's my tip for you, as you can see better in the writing I did on a copy of your shot below. This is something I still struggle with in my edits but am trying to overcome it. Smiley

I try to look for shadows in the background shot i'm going to use if there is no sun present in the pic, this tells me where the sun is by the direction the shadows fall in. I then try to take my screenshots to match this in FS2004, I'll fly my plane in the direction that matches the sun's placement in the background i'm gonna use. As you can see in the shot, you have glare on the plane fuselage from the angle to the right, when the shadows on the ground tell me the sun is up and to the left. When you get these things right or close, it really adds to the realism of the edit. Hope this helps.

SmileyBob

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Reply #3 - Apr 26th, 2005 at 12:41pm

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Great shot but the master is right, I get picky about lighting too.
 

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Reply #4 - Apr 26th, 2005 at 1:08pm

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if i was to be picky...
i would say the gradient is wrong for the sky, considering everything else in the edit..
 
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Reply #5 - Apr 26th, 2005 at 1:48pm

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Duely noted Bob Smiley
I didn't even think to check that Roll Eyes
Always good to get some feedback from "the master" (to quote Sgt_IC ) Cheesy

Yo Andy...I didn't even notice it 'till you pointed it out, all I've done is stick the Hawks in. Smiley

Cheers chaps,

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