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Blue skyes with a little tuch of Jet Fumes (Read 473 times)
Jul 24th, 2004 at 9:06am

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Nothing much, but its my first attempt doing Jet blur. Please give some constructive critisism.

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Reply #1 - Jul 24th, 2004 at 11:13am

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hmm good attempt but theres a little too much of it for idle power me thinks Cheesy
 

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Reply #2 - Jul 24th, 2004 at 2:53pm

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but not a bad first attempt though Smiley Smiley
 
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Reply #3 - Jul 24th, 2004 at 10:59pm

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I like it....
 
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Reply #4 - Jul 25th, 2004 at 4:05am

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Nice! However, a couple of things to make it even better:

1) A little too much haze for when it's on the ground & taxiing.
2) Slightly too high on the contrast IMHO.

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Reply #5 - Jul 25th, 2004 at 4:53am

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Reply #6 - Jul 25th, 2004 at 5:08am

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To add:
in most of the aircraft photos I've seen, the aircraft itself doesn't blur, it's the surroundings that blur. You can check what I mean on airliners.net,
good edit for a first.
 
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Reply #7 - Jul 25th, 2004 at 10:59am

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Thanks guys, I will think about what you sayed the next time its time for an Edit of this type!
 
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