clicky

A good attempt.  You told the "story" of the landing well.  Don't be afraid to play with your tower view settings and set up a "static" camera that will let you fly by at virtually any angle!  Also, try shooting in "takes".  It'll rid you of the pesky red message window, plus you'll get almost EXACTLY what you're shooting for.  It'll take a little longer to produce, but the end result will be much more of what you saw in your mind.

Well done nonetheless!